Re: Proof follow up | "Work Becomes Her" in The Employee
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >
To: Asher Foundation publications < ███████████████████████████████████████ >
Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>
Hi █████ ,
I’m glad to hear that you found the graphic design striking. I’ve attached another 2 page spread to demonstrate that the treatment of image and caption is consistent. In terms of formatting, the design is meant to enhance readability of the captions as is the punctuation change of a comma to a full stop after 1977 and 1974. We can replace the commas if you like.
Please also let me know how to proceed with regards to Bob vs. Robert.
The book will be 6 x 9 inches.
Best,
Lauren
I’m glad to hear that you found the graphic design striking. I’ve attached another 2 page spread to demonstrate that the treatment of image and caption is consistent. In terms of formatting, the design is meant to enhance readability of the captions as is the punctuation change of a comma to a full stop after 1977 and 1974. We can replace the commas if you like.
Please also let me know how to proceed with regards to Bob vs. Robert.
The book will be 6 x 9 inches.
Best,
Lauren