The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Final review of Work Becomes Her

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi J,

I’ve reviewed the Morisot section. I’ve made a few copy-edit comments, but aside from those this reworking is excellent.

 The transition between discussing wet nursing as a class issue, to a racialized issue is now clear, intentional, and demonstrates the importance of its discussion in this essay. Similarly footnote 77, where you position yourself, is important and very well executed. And the discussion of Jackson works well in the flow of you argument. I think you can feel good to stand by this content. 

xL

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