Final notes

Here are my notes on the final pdf.

Page 17: Wrong Page. “Contract for Services” seems to begin on page 312 (not 307).

Page 25, paragraph 3, line 1: Typo: repeated word. Remove the first “to" (the one outside the quote), 

Page 25, para 6, line 3: Typo: extraneous quotation mark. Remove the quote between “arts" and “to”.

Page 215, para 1, line 39: Date changes needed as Kelly Mark died. Change “ongoing” to “2025”.

Page 215, para 1, line 43: Tense change needed for same reason. Change “negotiates” to “negotiated”.

Page 308 and 310: What are these pages?

Overall: The Cover and back cover text is not represented in these PDFs. 

 

 

 

I have a couple questions: 

pg. 25, para 6, line 3 seems to have two additional quotation marks -- can you check that quote once more and see if perhaps both of these should be removed?

also on pg. 25, the sentence just after that quote continues "allow me to elaborate: This..." should that "This" not be lower-case?

that's how far I have gotten, but I'm working on it.

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