The Employee by joshua schwebel
About this project

Re: Finishing up

Michelle Lacombe <█████████████████> To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>, Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Hey all,
I went through the text and did quite a bit of work in the last section (i kept what was cut in case you totally miss something i cut). The last parts are always weaker cause I have not combed through them 800 times... Anyway, thanks for your comments and feedback. All very helpful and encouraging!

I am ready to say that draft #2 is done, ready to hand over to you and the other editor.
Parts that are highlighted in yellow might need some fact checking, maybe we can divide that work up?

Let me know what you think!
Michelle