The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Edits to Work Becomes Her + Invoice 3

Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>, Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Hi Josh and Lauren,

Sounds great - thank you for the update.

I’ve attached here my invoice for the last few texts, and will send along a final invoice once the final pieces are complete!

Best,
Jessica 

Attachments:

  • file The Employee copyedit invoice 3 - Invoice.pdf

Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ >, Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

hi Jessica,
Thanks for your invoice. I did want to just ask you to do a final review of the Asher section before we call it officially done. I integrated your suggestions, but added a few minor clarifications for review. 
If you'd be so kind as to re-invoice once you have signed off on this chunk, that would be probably best.
We will be in touch very soon with the remaining text from Lauren.
warm regards,
Josh

Attachments:

  • file Work Becomes Her_for JA with MAFedits_May 11_JS_May_18.pages

Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> Cc: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Hi Josh,

I’ve reviewed your minor changes and see nothing that needs any additional edits, save for one very small thing: on page 18 where you’ve added in parentheses “…a workplace in which there are fixed boundaries…” you simply need to add a comma after “i.e.” so it should read:

(i.e., a workplace in which there are fixed boundaries…)

My initial invoice stands here - no addition charges :) 

Thank you!
Jessica
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Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Jessica,
Big thanks for this! I’ll make that change and send out the payment right away.
Warmly,
Josh