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Re JA's copy-edits

Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

hi Lauren,
I just went through Jessica's suggestions in my essay, which I am attaching here for you to review.
Unfortunately, re the Asher section, it looks like Jessica reviewed an older version somehow. I cross-referenced the most recent email you sent her, and it was definitely her mistake, but it's understandable given the multiple versions circulating. In any case, the newer version still needs her review.
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Attachments:

  • file Schwebel Work Becomes Her JA Edit JS updates.pages

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Hi Josh,

Both of your edits look good to me, though it looks like you need one more round together on the text to finalise it. How about you send this back to her with a note about the mistaken Asher version, and ask for another round?

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Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Sounds good!
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Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

hi Lauren,
Just a quick rebound to you of the Asher section with JA's edits and my minor tweaks. Check it over and let me know if it needs to go back to JA or if we can accept it as ready to send onwards!
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Attachments:

  • file Work Becomes Her_for JA with MAFedits_May 11_JS_May_18.pages