The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Re: Updates / check in

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> Cc: Bopha Chhay <████████████████████ >

Hi Bopha, 

I hope that the last bits of summer are treating you well. 

Josh and I have taken a few peeks at your progress since our last notes and continue to be so impressed by the text. Thank you!

If you want to talk through the conclusion or any other notes, please let us know. Otherwise, would it be possible to have a new draft by the end of next week?

Warmly,
Lauren


Bopha Chhay <████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren, Josh, 

I will send a revised draft to you by Fri/Sat. I got slightly derailed by the beginning of the semester. 

Thanks for your suggestions. As I was rewriting the conclusion I realized that I needed to return to Josh's work.  I had unwittingly prevented myself, as I thought other essays would more directly speak about the work. I feel like the text is much more anchored now. I wasn't feeling wholly comfortable with the primary focus being on my own (partial) experience. I will complete the edits by the end of the week, and would be more than happy to speak if this helps speed things up.  It's taken me so much longer than I anticipated.  Thank you so much for your patience.

best, 







Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Bopha Chhay <████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks so much Bopha!
Looking forward to seeing where you have taken the text. Im sure it will be excellent.
Best,
Lauren