The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Fwd: Image reproduction request

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>



Begin forwarded message:

From: Lauren Wetmore <>
Subject: Re: Image reproduction request
Date: 26 April 2024 at 11:42:47 CEST
To: <>
Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Attachments:

  • file The Employee_MAF fact check_Response 1_25April.pdf

Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

hi Lauren,
In preparation for our meeting today, I compared the proof you sent to ████ with my own copy of the text. There are no significant differences between the two versions other than minor variations in punctuation. I think that we sent it to Jessica for proof-reading for one more pass after it went to ████, which would explain these inconsistencies. I did, however, notice one mis-correction, which I repaired and highlighted for you. I'm attaching the complete text which I want to be my ultimate, final version.
Since you last saw it, I have continued to rework the section on Morisot, since, as we discussed, I was feeling that it was not up to standard and needed tightening up. I have done that, and hope you agree that these changes improve the text.
See you shortly!
x

Attachments:

  • file Schwebel Work Becomes Her FINAL_updated updated updated.pages

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Asher Foundation publications < ███████████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi █████,
As promised, here is our correspondence with ████
All best,
Lauren

Begin forwarded message:

From: Lauren Wetmore <>
Subject: Re: Image reproduction request
Date: 26 April 2024 at 11:42:47 CEST
To: <>
Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Dear ████,

Thank you for this rich response. We were grateful to receive captions, image files, the photographer’s contact information; as well as the notes on Josh’s text, which have contributed to its accuracy. All of the suggested edits have been incorporated. Please find the updated text attached, with the areas in question highlighted.

Robert and Gary have both released permission for their photographs: Gary without condition, and Robert with with a condition that has been address in a footnote.

We will now proceed with copy-edit and design with the understanding that no further changes are necessary from the Michael Asher Foundation. You and Poppy will receive the final proof once it is ready. 

With best wishes,
Lauren


Attachments:

  • file The Employee_MAF fact check_Response 1_25April.pdf