The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Update!

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Josh,

I thought that I would consolidate some ongoing threads in an email, so that we can catch each other up!

- Design: Do we have an idea from H9 of when they will be coming back to us with the design pitch?

- Work Becomes Her: Thank you for sharing this new version with me! It is looking great. I would send it back to JA one more as you have added a bit of text, just to make sure that everything is right. 

- Land Acknowledgement: I’ve done a little trimming and moving. What do you think?

- My introduction: I am struggling very badly with a writing block. Please rest assured that this has nothing to do with you or the project. I am working through it. 

Blurb: I’ve made a few little changes and proposed a bigger change for your review. Let me know when you are happy with this and we can set it as “done”.

- Let me know how the email archive and your new addition to the narrative are going!

xL

Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

hi Lauren,
thanks for this update.
I further tweaked both the LA and the blurb.
writing block be damned! I am sorry you are struggling. I am happy to speak over the phone to try to untangle what is holding you back, if that would be helpful.
I am reworking the artist's narrative. Trying to hold myself back from too invasively changing it, but I do think that the edits I am making are improving the text's clarity and purpose.
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x
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Hi Josh,
 
Thanks for these kind words! I think the issue is mostly that I’m in a very stressful place in life, right now, and it isn’t allowing me to think in the way that writing requires. I will work through it though.

I’m excited to read the new artist narrative and let me know if you want to talk through the LA after my message yesterday.

xL