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Re: The Employee: Chhay & Valcourt-Synnot ready for edit

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> Cc: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ >

Hi Jessica,

Thanks for your editorial magic on Bopha’s text. Everything looks good to me - and I have made comment/suggestions on the two outstanding questions. Send it over for your final word.

And a quick update that Josh and I have decided not to include a bibliography in the book. The footnotes are working well as reference points, and as the book is not strictly an academic publication, a bibliography doesn’t seem needed. 

More soon!

Lauren

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Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

I think “page 1” works well for those two sources, and I like adding the names of the co-founders in the text itself, too. It flows well and gives them credit up front. All of those changes look great!

I also think it’s a good move to do away with the bibliography - readers will be able to access the sources cited via the information in the footnotes, like you’ve said, which is really what’s necessary.

Thanks!
Jessica
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Terrific Jessica! 

Glad that this all makes sense between us. 

Is Bopha’s text final then? I wanted to make sure that there weren’t any outstanding questions in the document I sent back.

Thank you,
Lauren


Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

It sure is - that text is good to go.

Jessica
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