The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Re: The Employee: Chhay & Valcourt-Synnot ready for edit

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Jessica,

Sorry to have been out of touch - I have been moving house. 

We have the text back from Camille and I think it is all resolved, but perhaps take one more look. Camille wasn’t familiar with using Word, so there might be some format issues.

Here is the file she has been working on: Valcourt-Synnott JA Edit.docx

Let me know how you go.

Thanks!
Lauren


Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

No problem. Is there something specific that needs to be reviewed in the document? I’ve taken a look at the remaining 3 comments - the first is asking for a footnote to be moved, the second is unaddressed, and as to the third (page 9) I would then hyphenate “Grant-writer” in the email signature consistently.

Best,
Jessica
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Jessica,

Yes, apologies. I am a bit concerned that something might have been missed while this text was travelling between all of us ,as I found a few spelling mistakes. 

I’ve reviewed and attached what I think is a clean version. Would you mind giving it a quick read to confirm that it is ready for layout?

Thanks very much,
Lauren

Attachments:

  • file Valcourt-Synnott_LW14Nov.docx

Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

No problem - attached here with a few minor corrections and a comment with a suggestion for a slight rewording.

Best,
Jessica

Attachments:

  • file Valcour-Synnott JA Nov 14.docx

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks Jessica!
I think we can call this one complete.
More soon,
Lauren