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Re: Edits to Work Becomes Her + Invoice 3

Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Hello Lauren,
I did an overhaul of the Morisot section that I think is ready for your review.
I didn’t track changes, but I imagine you can compare it with previous versions in order to see the broad alterations. I think that this steers the text more confidently and with more clarity than before, but let me know what you think.
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Hi Josh, 

Read the new section and conclusion over yesterday and today. I agree that you have put a finer point on the discussion. It was worthwhile work!

I’ve make a few copy edits and a few suggestions. Let me know if we want to discuss.

xL



Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi dear Lauren,
Thank you for your comments and thoughts. Reading it through with that reflection, I am retooling a few paragraphs again to make my conclusion clearer.
I’m sorry for not *ending* the editorial process, but I think it’s worth the effort.
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Sounds good!