The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Re: The Employee!

Denise Ryner <█████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi there,

sorry I've been increasingly ill since returning from Brazil then things finally turned around today. I added some clarification comments. And struck out a random remark that seemed confusing and repetitive of what I'd said in the previous sentence.

I used cartoon balloons.

Denise




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Attachments:

  • file The Employee_ Denise Ryner in conversation with Josh and Lauren_27Nov_DR.pdf

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Denise Ryner <█████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hey Denise, 

Good to hear you have turned a corner - travel on that scale is exhausting enough, without illness on top.

Thanks for these notes - they are all completely fine to incorporate. I will do that now and then send the text to our copy editor. Once we have the final edit from her, I will send it back to you for one more review. 

How does that sound to you?

In the meantime, please send us a bio (3rd person, up to 250 words).

Warmly,
Lauren 


Denise Ryner <█████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi,

here's a brief one

Denise




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Attachments:

  • file Denise Ryner 121 word bio.docx

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Denise Ryner <█████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks for the bio Denise!

Here is the copy edited version - only minor line edits were made. 

If this version looks good to you, then I think we can consider this the final copy.

If you have any ideas about a title, do let us know.

Wishing you a peaceful and restful holiday break,
Lauren

Attachments:

  • file Ryner JA Edit_LW18Dec.docx