The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Dear Jessica,

I’m elated to be sending you the two penultimate text to copy edit for The Employee!

Attached is an essay from Josh, and the contributors’ bios.

The only remaining text will be my introduction to the book, which will come to you as soon as possible.

As usually, please let us know what is possible on your end in terms of getting these edits back.

Warmly,
Lauren

Attachments:

  • file Contributor Bios for JA.docx
  • file Work Becomes Her_for JA_19feb23.docx

Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

Exciting to see the final few pieces come in!

Right now my schedule is booked until the end of March, so the earliest I could start working on these is Monday, April 1. If you have the introduction completed by then I can schedule time to edit all three - do you have a sense of how long your introduction will be? Once I know that, I can give you a timeline.

Thanks so much,
Jessica
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Jessica Antony (she/her)
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Josh, 

Offline from Jessica for the moment.

It's too bad that she can’t do this editing immediately, but I think that we should still proceed with her, rather than finding another editor. Here is my suggested strategy.

We hand in to House9 the final material, as promised, by the end of the month (or thereabouts) - except for my intro, work becomes her, and the bios, which we will submit to them in their draft forms. We will tell them about this scheduling issue with Jessica and that they should leave final typesetting for those three texts for last, but will receive the final versions by mid-April (I’ll confirm that final bit with Jessica in my reply to her.)

That way we can move forward with design, keep Jessica as editor, and I honestly don’t think it will be a huge issue with the schedule as they said that it would take them at least a month to design it anyways. 

What do you think?

L





Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks Lauren,
This sounds like a good solution.
Thanks for thinking this through.
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Cool thanks!


Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Jessica,

No surprise that your services are in high demand! We are happy to wait our turn.

If my text is between 1000 and 1500 words when do you think we could have an edit of all three after 1 April?

Many thanks, as always,
Lauren


Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

Thanks for your patience with my reply! If you could have everything to me by April 1 I can turn them around by April 22!

Thanks,
Jessica 
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Please note that my email response time is, on average, 48 hours.


Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks very much Jessica!
We will incorporate this into our timeline.

Until soon,
Lauren


Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Jessica,

I hope you are having a nice long weekend. 

As discussed, please do proceed with the two texts (bios and Josh’s essay). I am running late on my intro and will try to get it to you as soon as possible.

Warmly,
Lauren


Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

Okay sounds good! I’ll get to these two texts asap.

Thanks,
Jessica
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Jessica Antony (she/her)
Writing | Editing | Publishing | Communicating

Please note that my email response time is, on average, 48 hours.


Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Dear Jessica,
A quick update regarding proofreading my second text “work becomes her”.
In the course of seeking permission for the reproduction of images for one of the artists discussed in my text (Michael Asher), the foundation requested some additional information be given for historical precision.

Until we are able to remediate these suggestions, please hold off on  copy-edits to the sections on Michael Asher’s work.

You can continue with the other sections. We will write again with the updated Asher text.
thanks,
Josh 


Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> Cc: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Hi Josh,

No problem - will do!

Thanks,
Jessica
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Jessica Antony (she/her)
Writing | Editing | Publishing | Communicating

Please note that my email response time is, on average, 48 hours.


Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Dear Jessica,

We have squared things with the Michael Asher Foundation and I am sending you the new draft with Michael Asher contend on pages 12-18 updated. The rest of the text remains the same, so your edits on those should not be effected.

I hope this is clear, but please let me know if you have any questions.

When do you expect we can have this and the bios back?

Thank and best,
Lauren

Attachments:

  • file Work Becomes Her_for JA with MAFedits_26April2024.docx

Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

Thanks for your patience with my reply! I’ve received the updated section for Josh’s text - just finishing that up and will have it and the contributor bios to you by Monday at the latest.

All the best,
Jessica
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Jessica Antony (she/her)
Writing | Editing | Publishing | Communicating

Please note that my email response time is, on average, 48 hours.


Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

That’s wonderful Jess, thanks!

Monday is absolutely fine, so don’t feel the need to rush.

Best,
Lauren


Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

Attached are the edited versions of Josh’s essay (note that I’ve kept the updated section on Asher in a separate file, leaving that section unedited and crossed out in the original) and the contributor bios.

Can you tell me when I can expect the final essay? My schedule is full now until September, so I’d like to get a sense of when to carve out some time for this last piece in order to get it back to you as soon as possible.

Best,
Jessica

Attachments:

  • file Contributor Bios JA Edit.docx
  • file Schwebel Work Becomes Her Asher Section JA Edit.docx
  • file Schwebel Work Becomes Her JA Edit.docx

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks Jessica!

We can consider the bio final and I will let Josh get back to you on your notes on his essay before I do a final review.

Unfortunately, we won’t be able to wait until September for the edit of the final text, so I will reach out to another editor for my (long overdue) introduction. Apologies for keeping you on the line for that one.

All best,
Lauren


Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

Apologies that I wasn’t clear in my last email - I can finish up the last essay, but I’d like to know when I can expect it so that I can carve out some time for it amidst other projects. Am I right in understanding that it’s around 1500 words?

Thanks!
Jessica
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Jessica Antony (she/her)
Writing | Editing | Publishing | Communicating

Please note that my email response time is, on average, 48 hours.


Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Jessica,

Apologies for my delayed response. My text will be between 1500 and 2500. I would hope to get it to you by the end of next week. 

Thank you,
Lauren