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Josh Schwebel

• 9:08 PM, Aug 21 (CEST)
Delete: “had the opportunity to”

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• 4:18 PM, Oct 12 (CEST)

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which have increased productivity as much as efficiency

Josh Schwebel

• 9:37 PM, Aug 21 (CEST)
this is unclear: I am not sure how productivity and efficiency are different.

Lauren Wetmore

• 6:16 PM, Aug 24 (CEST)
Maybe it means productivity to the detriment of efficiency?

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• 10:03 PM, Oct 12 (CEST)

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detritus

Josh Schwebel

• 9:39 PM, Aug 21 (CEST)
is there a better word for this? detritus, for me, means waste, and I think you want to say something positive, something atmospheric that envelops the work environment

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• 12:23 AM, Oct 13 (CEST)

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Josh Schwebel

• 9:39 PM, Aug 21 (CEST)
Add: “,”

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• 12:55 AM, Oct 13 (CEST)

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difficultly

Josh Schwebel

• 9:40 PM, Aug 21 (CEST)
Also not sure about word choice here.

Lauren Wetmore

• 6:16 PM, Aug 24 (CEST)
What about "If artist-run centres are losing their relevance, it is because we can no longer run them like artists."

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• 1:32 AM, Oct 13 (CEST)

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Josh Schwebel

• 9:24 PM, Aug 21 (CEST)
yeah, I will see if that is discoverable

Michelle Lacombe

• 7:18 PM, Oct 12 (CEST)
I was told in person, but I can maybe track this down...

Lauren Wetmore

• 1:05 PM, Oct 16 (CEST)

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