The Employee by joshua schwebel
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• 9:08 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
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• 12:09 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)

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• 12:09 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)

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• 9:04 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
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• 9:05 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
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• 9:08 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
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• 9:10 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
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• 12:16 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)

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• 9:11 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
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• 12:16 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)

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• 9:11 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
Add: “as a performance”

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work

Josh Schwebel

• 2:55 PM, Sep 8 (CEST)
I feel uncomfortable quantifying my time and work

Camille-Zoe Valcourt-Synnott

• 4:43 PM, Sep 18 (CEST)
I totally get it, but I think it's important to mention how you didn't just delegate this work and call it a day - you were involved throughout the whole process and for the full duration of the project!

Lauren Wetmore

• 10:37 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)

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When I first read the text it felt important that Camille noted the amount of work you continued to do no the project. It confirms similar notes you have made in other contributions to the book.

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Josh Schwebel

• 9:13 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
It might be nice here to add the anecdote about ███████ ██████ and her email inquiry about your email signature? I have the email if you want to reference it…

Camille-Zoe Valcourt-Synnott

• 12:07 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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Yes! Would love to refrence it if you can send me a screenshot by email :)
The Employee: Reflections from the employee*

Lauren Wetmore

• 10:34 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)
I like the repetition of the title as the title for the text and the name of the application, it signals a fealty to the format you have chosen. I also think that simplifying the title to "The Employee: Reflections from the employee, mirrors that repetition and recursiveness of your format and the overall project. It is punchier. what do you both think?

Josh Schwebel

• 11:11 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)
I like it!! 😀

Camille-Zoe Valcourt-Synnott

• 12:11 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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yes, i like it too! :)

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• 12:11 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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The last performance

Lauren Wetmore

• 1:51 PM, Sep 6 (CEST)
Was this the performance where you watched a CCA live-stream event about how to apply for grants (or something similar)? I remember that being a great detail and would be good to include your impression of here.

Josh Schwebel

• 2:57 PM, Sep 8 (CEST)
I agree!

Camille-Zoe Valcourt-Synnott

• 12:10 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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• 9:05 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
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• 12:10 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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• 9:07 AM, Sep 21 (CEST)
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• 12:10 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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Josh Schwebel

• 11:14 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)
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• 12:08 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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Josh Schwebel

• 9:33 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)
Replace: “The fact that we knew each other and had worked together in the past made” with “From his knowledge of my work and his experience having worked with me before,”

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• 12:04 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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Josh Schwebel

• 9:35 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)
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• 12:04 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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Josh Schwebel

• 9:40 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)
Replace: “so thrilled” with “really happy”

Josh Schwebel

• 9:40 AM, Sep 25 (CEST)
to avoid repeating "thrilled" from the line before

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• 12:04 AM, Sep 26 (CEST)

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by the artist

Camille-Zoe Valcourt-Synnott

• 11:55 PM, Sep 29 (CEST)
Josh, I'm assuming you wrote it! please confirm

Josh Schwebel

• 3:46 PM, Oct 1 (CEST)
Yes I did

Lauren Wetmore

• 4:04 PM, Oct 1 (CEST)

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In addition to making the work visible as a performance, another challenge throughout the project was to create a meaningful exchange with the public, to find ways of to communicatinge what this work was about. Added Aat the beginning of the project Josh, added this text to my email signature: by the artist, my email signature as the employee read: Camille-Zoé Valcourt-Synnott (she/her) — Fundraiser/Grantwriter The employment of a fundraiser/ grant-writer on behalf of Forest City Gallery is the artistic work of Joshua Schwebel. The employee is funded by a grant awarded to the artist by the Canada Council for the Arts. This email and subsequent correspondence may be included in documentation of the artwork. For anyone who was not already familiar with the project, this email signature was the only clue that something was up, that our interaction could potentially be a part of anthe artwork. For a whole year, only one person did asked about it. She and was confused and about what…

Lauren Wetmore

• 3:10 PM, Oct 1 (CEST)
@privatejosh@gmail.com @ I love the addition of this anecdote! I've made a few edits and asked one questions. After these are done we can send the text to copy editing!

Josh Schwebel

• 3:45 PM, Oct 1 (CEST)
Yes!

Lauren Wetmore

• 4:04 PM, Oct 1 (CEST)

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