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I used emotional labour here, but also considered 'immaterial labour'. I felt that immaterial labour was what I was referring to more broadly. Happy change either way.

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However, some funders do not have a designated point person, instead opting only to make available a generic ‘info’ email. (In some cases this can be attributed to transitional moments). This makes it extremely difficult to maintain consistent conversations about organizational intentions, directions, or simply to ask for clarifications about the priorities of funding programs.

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@lauren.eleanor.wetmore@gmail.com do you think footnote 19 is necessary? I'd be happy to delete it.
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The book he is referring to is 'other conundrums', by Monika Kin Gagnon.
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can remove. I think this was a mental note to self I accidentally left in
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No, in her thesis she's speaking about Canada Council.
SomeOne of the most morbid long-term effects of underfunding , the most morbid, are burnout, organizational self-censorship and a loss of institutional memory.

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The quote from Fuse as cited in the footnote reads as 'Of the long-term effects of underfunding, the most morbid are burnout, organizational self-censorship and a loss of institutional memory.'

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I suggest you remove this. 221A would need contextualisation for uninformed readers and I worry that this might derail focus.

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I deleted this as it would necessitate you indicating earlier in the paragraph that you are speaking specifically about the CCA, but I think that your points are relevant to most public funding bodies.

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:31 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “(chair of the more other conundrums panel)”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:14 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:38 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “emerging artists”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:38 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “ir”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:31 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “still”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:14 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:31 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “But”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:14 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:35 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “but”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:16 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:35 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “allows for more of” with “also informs”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:16 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:35 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “more”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:16 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:35 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “these”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:16 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:36 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “these”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:16 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:36 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “the”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:16 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:36 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “me”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:16 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:37 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “their” with “its”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:38 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “for emerging artists”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:44 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “ed” with “s”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:39 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “marks”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:39 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “s”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:39 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “for”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:39 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “also”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:39 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “ing”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:40 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “.” with “and”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:40 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “T” with “t”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:41 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “I saw these spaces as maintaining a boldness in their ability to actively attempt to address systemi…”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:41 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “I see artist-run spaces actively attempting to address systemic and structural changes.”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:47 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “are” with “were”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:18 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:45 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “artist-run centre”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:45 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “a”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:45 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “where” with “in addressing”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:46 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “could be addressed”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:46 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “were” with “are”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:17 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:47 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “he neighbourhoods where these centers are situated”
Replace: “T” with “This”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:18 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:48 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “at Artspeak”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:18 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:55 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “to” with “with”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:19 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:55 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “with it other”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:20 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:56 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “of 2020”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:20 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:50 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “B” with “In Vancouver,”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:18 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:53 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “(Artspeak)”
Add space

Bopha Chhay

• 3:19 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:53 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “ve” with “s”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:18 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:54 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “we were” with “Artspeak was”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:18 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:55 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “what”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:18 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:55 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “was”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:19 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:55 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “.”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:19 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:55 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “and” with “We”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:19 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:00 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “O” with “The relationship with program managers for funding bodies is particularly important as o”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:56 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “and”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:20 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:56 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “,” with “.”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:21 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:56 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “as wide as the wider community that we are situated.”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:21 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:57 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “/” with “and the”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:19 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:58 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete paragraph

Bopha Chhay

• 3:21 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:59 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “role”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:21 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:59 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “(both public and private)”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 4:59 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “both public and private”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:25 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:00 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “) particularly with program managers,”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:25 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:00 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete space

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:03 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “that of”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:03 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “’”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:01 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “and”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:01 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “your applications”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:02 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “It’s” with “These”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:02 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “n” with “re”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:02 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “relationships”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:02 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “an”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:27 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:02 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “in order”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:03 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “with”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:06 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “,”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:07 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “determined” with “determine”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:04 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “(”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:04 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “at council” with “)”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:05 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “to”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:06 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “was” with “is”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:10 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “with that of funders.” with “, which”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:10 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “A” with “a”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:10 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “this transition w” with “made for”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:07 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “priorities of”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:07 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “their”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:07 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “would” with “are”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:07 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “be”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:07 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “(public) plans and policies”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:08 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “F” with “public”
Add: “f”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:08 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “The plans and policies of”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:09 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “d” with “s”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:09 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “a funding body’s”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:10 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “s”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:11 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “as”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:11 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “transitions”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:46 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “sector”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:46 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “with” with “to”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:46 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “associations that”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:42 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “ed” with “ing”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:43 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “ing”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:43 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “would”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:43 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “s”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:43 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “While s” with “S”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:44 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “but”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:44 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “ied positions” with “ies”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:45 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “. For example, the ‘[name of donor]’ curator or public engagement.’ T” with “,”
Add: “t”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:45 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “P” with “For instance p”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:47 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “However, Ddespite these short-term gains, Oorganizations often make compromises that may be at odds …”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:29 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:47 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “but often a short-term gain”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:48 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “often”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:48 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “often”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:48 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “slow, and” with “slow and”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:32 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:49 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “and”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:49 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “T” with “In these cases, organizations often make compromises that may be at odds with their values.”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:49 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “his often”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:50 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “t”
Replace: “comes with” with “In addition to the frequent”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 5:50 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “he”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:28 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Josh Schwebel

• 7:01 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “ed”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:08 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:53 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “We workinged towards”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:30 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:53 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete space

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:52 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “I” with “During my tenure at Artspeak”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:30 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:52 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “and leaned”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:30 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:52 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “the arts service organization”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:30 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:53 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “.” with “while”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:30 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:53 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “would” with “was”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:53 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “be”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:53 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “during” with “in”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:54 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “,”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:54 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “arts service organization” with “the ongoing work of”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:54 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “ARCA’s (” with “the”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:55 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “(ARCA”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:55 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “ongoing work”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:57 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “answer FUSE’s call to”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 7:57 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Format: italic

Bopha Chhay

• 3:31 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 1:03 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “kind of”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:05 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 1:03 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “me”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:05 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 1:04 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “a”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:05 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 12:58 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “, that”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:04 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 12:58 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “s”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:04 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 12:58 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Replace: “.” with “,”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:04 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 12:58 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “The poster”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:04 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

New

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Lauren Wetmore

• 1:08 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Delete: “There are two events that”

Bopha Chhay

• 3:07 AM, Sep 18 (CEST)

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Lauren Wetmore

• 1:08 PM, Sep 12 (CEST)
Add: “ed”

Bopha Chhay

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