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APPLICATION QUESTIONS - Draft

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Replace: “have been” with “are currently”

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The new space will feature a wet work space for cleaning paint brushes and a kitchenette to clean dishes after events; because of a lack of kitchen and working space, both of these activities have been conducted in one of our bathrooms, which doesn’t comply with proper hygiene protocols.
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Would it make sense to talk about installing a ramp instead of one of the stair cases over talking about a wet work space? Not partial to either necessarily - and the wet workspace probably is more COVID related than accessibility related.
benefits our community members
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keeps our community safe (?)

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In a recent community survey we conducted relating to the potential move to a new location, over 90% of our members indicated that a fully accessible venue was of utmost importance.
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I think the emphasis of this first para should be on how the space would allow the gallery to function more safely during COVID. The accessibility / members wish for accessibility seems to draw away from this.

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