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APPLICATION QUESTIONS - Healthy Communities Fund

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would the bike co-op qualify as a grassroots community org?

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Please describe how your community has shaped your project proposal

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do we answer this?
FCG has been interested in programming an outdoors film screening for quite some time as it appeared a good context to gather safely outdoors while following social distancing guidelines. We wanted to invite someone in the community to curate the screening for this event and after reaching out to the FCFF Board of Directors, some of whom are longstanding FCG supporters, their current director, Dorothy Downs, manifested an interest in collaborating on this project.

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this segment is not directly answering the question. I would cut this. We should just outline each org's role.

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Marked as resolved

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this also needs something written about compensation / why each org is not getting paid through the budget.

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lease describe how your community has shaped your project proposal

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can we answer this

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